• DrSteveBrule@mander.xyz
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    21 days ago

    Too bad we didn’t get an accurate towards the source material Forrest Gump movie

    Edit: Too bad we didn’t get a Forrest Gump movie that stuck to the source material

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      21 days ago

      That was hard for us - outside your head - to read. If only there were some additional markings, like spicy dots, that you could have put in there to delineate sub-clauses and such; and help reproduce the sentence flow you were imagining.

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        21 days ago

        Honestly, after I posted it, I reread it and totally agree with what you’re saying. I also didn’t really care to spend the time editing it as I felt it was good enough for a silly lemmy comment on a post with very little engagement.